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Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Thu Oct 15, 2020 5:54 am

Flack wrote: Tue Oct 13, 2020 11:21 am Thank you for your feedback.
I appreciate that. I am not trying to "bust your balls," I want to both learn if I am wrong and, if I can, help you to write a better book on the next one. I mean, my long explanations are to show that I exhaustively think about things, and I have reasons for when I make claims.

If I just said that I think it shouldn't take 16 hours to go from Denver to some place in Nevada, it could be argued well, he had to go into rough parts where there are bad roads and it's really hard to get to. That argument doesn't work any more, and my long explanation explains why I made the conclusions I did.

Again, I appreciate you're willing to graciously accept my comments.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Tue Oct 13, 2020 11:21 am

Thank you for your feedback.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Tue Oct 13, 2020 9:51 am

Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am Marvin was not a GS-15, and a mailroom person in a top secret agency would
I ran out of steam. In a science fiction book about the government 3D printing clones to create a thinktank, I never thought I would be defending the mileage between Denver and a made up town, or the paperwork and processes required to transfer an employee.
Flack, you wrote a good story. Hopefully, you will write even more in the future. I'd like to see you write great stories. Which is why I'm picking on the stuff it is directly possible to verify as inaccurate or potentially inaccurate. That means that anything verifyably real-world related is grounded in reality, meticulously fact-checked.

When Arthur Hailey wrote his blockbuster novels, all of the technical details are well researched. When Robert A, Heinlein wrote one of his space travel novels, there were some facts about rocket travel. Him and his wife separately did the calculations, by hand, and even with a slide rule, it took 3 hours (this was in the 1950s). Since they matched, he could presume it was correct. This, for a mention of a piece of information that used one sentence in a 200 page book.

I mean, cloning people, printing them on 3-d printers? Big, huge science fiction, way out there. How someone gets moved from one part of the country or changing a job? Little stuff. And invariably, it's the little stuff that people get caught for.

* Watergate was first exposed because a security guard noticed tape on a door lock.
* A major cybercrime incident, explained in the book The Cookoo's Nest was discovered because of a 50c discrepancy in computer billing records.
* Timothy McVeigh was caught because of a bad tail light.
* Al Capone didn't get in trouble over his income tax or the murders he committed or arranged, he went to jail for lying on a form.
* Martha Stewart didn't get any jail time for the securities fraud she was probably guilty of, she went to jail because she didn't keep her mouth shut - as she had the right to do - she went to jail for lying to the FBI.
* O.J. Simpson went to prison because he wanted to be a cowboy over people who might have stolen his stuff instead of calling the cops.
* The Deepwater Horizon exploded and cost BP $30 billion because on-site managers did not want to run tests - which were almost certainly necessary given the issues they had dealt with before - which would have cost about $1 million.

It's the little things that more often get people in trouble because they're easier to discover or check. And they're easier for people to miss.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Tue Oct 13, 2020 9:48 am

Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 am I mean, as I said, I have worked in different Federal agencies as a contractor employee, and my basic qualification was I walked in off the street.
There is no way you were hired as a federal contractor without passing a background check.
Well, it was in my case. I was hired by Kelly Services and worked for them. One day I was called to work for a week for a DOE contractor using Kelly at the Department of Energy main headquarters in Washington. No investigation, no nothing.
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am There is not a federal agency in the country, and especially one one located within a hundred miles of the nation's capitol, that would hire someone off the street, give them access to their computer systems, and not perform a background check.
Well, I'm telling you, I was also hired - by a different company - to work as a technical support person at the Consumer Product Safety Commission in Bethesda, MD. I worked there for three months before going offsite to work at the contractor's office to handle programming for a different agency. In none of these cases was I subjected to any federal investigation. I know for a fact if they had performed a credit check alone I would never have been approved, I had lousy credit. Either they performed a secret check after I was hired and working there, that I was never told about, or they didn't do any checking. I know that had they had done checking it is likely there would have been flags that would have probably gotten me rejected. Especially if the examination is supposed to cover the previous 10 years as it did on the SF71.
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am That would have been completed after you applied for the position but before you were offered the job. 100%, that happened.
100% it did not happen. A through 10-year background check (as is the requirement for an SF71) would not have allowed me to be approved. Either they've changed things dramatically since 9/11 - which might be likely - or you're mistaken about how contractor employees were handled.
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 amAlso, yes, I understand putting him as a mailroom clerk was a demotion (and a punishment), why send him to another agency? And again, it still makes no sense: either he was given a 2/3 cut in salary - without advance notice, a thing that would cause the union to go berserk - to the pay of a mail clerk (at GS 2-3, about $25,000 a year), or they're paying a mail clerk $86,000 a year at the GS 15 rate.
Marvin's boss wanted to get rid of him but couldn't fire him because it would take too long and cause too much paperwork.
Right, so transfer him to another department. Problem solved.
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am Instead, she had him transferred to another agency. It happens.
But why would this new agency care about "punishing" him by assigning him to the mail room? Presumably she would be sending over his personnel records, in which case it would show his work as a technical person. So their response is to waste someone with technical skills delivering mail.
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am The whole purpose of putting Marvin in the mail room was to get him to quit, which requires no paperwork and bypasses things like unemployment claims and dealing with HR.
Which still makes no sense. If she was going to move him to the mail room, then she wold demote him to the mail room at the VA hospital. If she transfers him to another agency, he is out of her hair, what he fuck does she care what they're having him do?
Flack wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 amAlso, I know you keep saying Marvin was GS-15, but that's an incorrect assumption on your part. I can tell you I know a lot of helpdesk employees who are GS-9s.
I'm basing this on ads I saw this week on USA Jobs.gov , in which, specifically, the Department of Veterans Affairs Denver office has several openings for IT professionals advertised at GS11-GS15. If Marvin started at GS9 - the salary I was getting when I was a contractor employee - after five years he would be at GS14. So that still isn't far off.

Now, I realize that you wrote that story three years ago, so let's say Marvin is a GS9. The 2017 GS9 yearly rate is $43,251.00 - $56,229.00. The 2017 GS3 rate (which is what a mail clerk would make) is $22,727.00 - $29,547.00, so either Marvin took a 50% pay cut - unlikely, as he could certainly get an IT job somewhere else in Denver for more than $12 an hour - or another federal agency having nothing to do with the VA is paying a trained IT person twice what he is worth as a mail clerk just to make the IT director of the Denver VA hospital happy she can punish a now former employee, at their own detriment. Federal employees may sometimes be stupid, but they're not that stupid.

You also noted that a mail clerk at a top secret agency isn't hired at GS3. Okay, so it's higher (I just looked). But it still makes no sense; a place being as technically oriented as the tombstone would be isn't looking 650 miles away for a mail clerk or desperately seeking one. For an IT professional, yeah.

And presuming the Tombstone does need people with TS-SCI clearances, why on earth would an IT person at a VA hospital have one?

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:26 am

AArdvark wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:20 am Flack, didn't you have to go through all this kind of plot scrutiny when you were up before the council of Nimh book professors?
I did. One of the three panel members found a pretty significant... well I don't know if I would call it a plot hole so much as they pointed out a scientific detail I forgot to mention. I'm pretty sure I went back and re-wrote at lease one major scene to address it.

Spoiler: I came up with a convoluted way of determining who was a clone and who wasn't. The professor pointed out that the clones would not have a pulse, which would have been a much simpler test to perform.
AArdvark wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:20 am I'm glad you aren't taking offense to this dissection
I'm more confused than offended, but that's okay. Everybody has a right to their opinion, and some people really get into the mundane details, which is a good thing to remember. I'm sure somebody somewhere cornered Stephen King and asked him how the kids at Carrie's prom kept the blood in the bucket from coagulating before they dumped it on Carrie's head and typed pages about the logistics of collecting, storying, and transporting pig's bloog. I'm currently working on a murder mystery involving a ghost and right now I have one paragraph about his death certificate which, based on this thread, I should probably expand to three chapters.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Mon Oct 12, 2020 6:19 am

Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 am I mean, as I said, I have worked in different Federal agencies as a contractor employee, and my basic qualification was I walked in off the street. If i had a Federal investigation of my background, it was neither disclosed to me nor was i aware of it, as in no case did any of my job applications state this. (I just remembered that in the case of the SF71 it does state they may investigate one's background). Nor was there ever any delay to show up, I was hired and the next day I'm working at a Federal agency same as if I were a Federal employee. If Federal employees of any sort have to have a security clearance of some kind even for lower-level jobs, but contractor employees don't, either this leaves a big hole in security (which may have been the case of Snowden, who was, i believe, a contractor for Booz, Allen, & Hamilton, but I also believe he did have a security clearance) or it explains why contractor employees are so much cheaper, since the government isn't spending $30-$50,000 to do a security clearance for a contractor mailroom clerk that they would have to on a Federal employee.
There is no way you were hired as a federal contractor without passing a background check. There is not a federal agency in the country, and especially one one located within a hundred miles of the nation's capitol, that would hire someone off the street, give them access to their computer systems, and not perform a background check. That would have been completed after you applied for the position but before you were offered the job. 100%, that happened.

Edward Snowden worked as a contractor for the CIA before working as a contractor for the NSA. Snowden either had TS or SCI access.
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 amAlso, yes, I understand putting him as a mailroom clerk was a demotion (and a punishment), why send him to another agency? And again, it still makes no sense: either he was given a 2/3 cut in salary - without advance notice, a thing that would cause the union to go berserk - to the pay of a mail clerk (at GS 2-3, about $25,000 a year), or they're paying a mail clerk $86,000 a year at the GS 15 rate.
I thought I sufficiently explained this in the book but maybe I didn't. Marvin's boss wanted to get rid of him but couldn't fire him because it would take too long and cause too much paperwork. Instead, she had him transferred to another agency. It happens. The whole purpose of putting Marvin in the mail room was to get him to quit, which requires no paperwork and bypasses things like unemployment claims and dealing with HR. Also, I know you keep saying Marvin was GS-15, but that's an incorrect assumption on your part. I can tell you I know a lot of helpdesk employees who are GS-9s.
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 amFirst, no agency is that overfunded that they can waste that kind of money. Second, again, regardless of this so-called demotion, when most places are screaming for qualified technical people why would they waste one on something a person with very little skills could do? Third, notwithstanding the intent of "punishment" this sort of obvious waste is something the Office of Inspector General would salivate over. This would be the sort of obvious waste they'd investigate, to see why a GS 15 employee has been assigned to a GS 2 or GS 3 position, at the GS 15 salary rate.
Without typing 50,000 words as to why this is wrong I'll just say every government agency is overfunded, this kind of thing happens all the time, the inspector general doesn't give a shit about it, and I've seen it dozens if not hundreds of times, Marvin was not a GS-15, and a mailroom person in a top secret agency would not be a GS-2.
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 amBased on an actual, current VA posting on USAJobs.gov, Marvin's status as an IT support person with a technical degree and five years experience should qualify him at at least GS 15, which is about $86,000 a year. Even if they can afford to waste that kind of money to punish someone else's employee - if the Tombstone is "The Hlibrary of Congress," then it is a legislative branch agency (as the real Library of Congress is), whereas the VA is an Executive branch agency - they have nothing to do with each other and security clearances are not transferable (a person with an existing security clearance from a different agency will get a less intensive abbreviated investigation but there is still an investigation.) How does the mere director of IT for the Denver Veterans Administration hospital get another agency to accept a known problem employee and then agree to pay him at about 3 times what a normal GS 2 or GS 3 employee doing that job would make? (Nowhere in the story does it say this "punishment" came with a reduction in GS rating or pay level.)
If nothing else, I find it fascinating that this is the part of the novel you have chosen to focus on.
Tdarcos wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 am I know you told me about the guy who ended up being a manager at a department that had no employees, but (not stated) he couldn't be RIFed (probably due to seniority). But in that case, he's still assigned to a manager position. He's being paid as a manager, even though he has nothing to do, not paid as a manager but assigned to work as a clerk in the mail room, that would raise flags in the OIG. It would look like favoritism.

Now, let's say Marvin normally has a job doing things like fixing servers, installing and tuning databases, and other highly technical work. In that case, he could have been downgraded to a technical support person who had to go around fixing people's computers or other work at their desks. That would make more sense, would still have him roaming all over the building, and isn't enough of a red flag that the IG's office would question it.

Also, if this work does require a security clearance, how does it get approved overnight? Marvin is working at an Executive Branch agency one day (the VA) and the next morning he is working for a Legislative Branch agency (the Hlibrary of Congress) doing something as sensitive as cloning would have to have very high security clearances, compartmentalization, and "need to know," separation. The mail would not be processed in the server room or where clones were being constructed, chances are nobody but the scientists dealing with them would know about it.

Yes, I understand that fiction sometimes requires you do things differently from reality. (Nobody ever comes out and admits on the witness stand they're guilty the way they did every week on Perry Mason.) But I'm not even a Federal employee and I know these things, it's likely others would too.
I ran out of steam. In a science fiction book about the government 3D printing clones to create a thinktank, I never thought I would be defending the mileage between Denver and a made up town, or the paperwork and processes required to transfer an employee.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by AArdvark » Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:20 am

Flack, didn't you have to go through all this kind of plot scrutiny when you were up before the council of Nimh book professors?

I'm glad you aren't taking offense to this dissection


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Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:16 am

Well, your points do answer a number of questions, but when I say "securirty clearance," I'm thinking of the "secret" level or level needed for SCI (Sensitive Classified Information) or SBU (Sensitive But Unclassified) . First, cloning people is the kind of thing that I would expect to have at least 'secret" if not "top secret" or even "codeword" access. It's the sort of "rancid," kind of activity that unless it was a crime to discuss it elsewhere, once people found out about it there would be leaks. (As occurred in the case of Edward Snowden.)

I mean, as I said, I have worked in different Federal agencies as a contractor employee, and my basic qualification was I walked in off the street. If i had a Federal investigation of my background, it was neither disclosed to me nor was i aware of it, as in no case did any of my job applications state this. (I just remembered that in the case of the SF71 it does state they may investigate one's background). Nor was there ever any delay to show up, I was hired and the next day I'm working at a Federal agency same as if I were a Federal employee. If Federal employees of any sort have to have a security clearance of some kind even for lower-level jobs, but contractor employees don't, either this leaves a big hole in security (which may have been the case of Snowden, who was, i believe, a contractor for Booz, Allen, & Hamilton, but I also believe he did have a security clearance) or it explains why contractor employees are so much cheaper, since the government isn't spending $30-$50,000 to do a security clearance for a contractor mailroom clerk that they would have to on a Federal employee.

Also, yes, I understand putting him as a mailroom clerk was a demotion (and a punishment), why send him to another agency? And again, it still makes no sense: either he was given a 2/3 cut in salary - without advance notice, a thing that would cause the union to go berserk - to the pay of a mail clerk (at GS 2-3, about $25,000 a year), or they're paying a mail clerk $86,000 a year at the GS 15 rate.

First, no agency is that overfunded that they can waste that kind of money. Second, again, regardless of this so-called demotion, when most places are screaming for qualified technical people why would they waste one on something a person with very little skills could do? Third, notwithstanding the intent of "punishment" this sort of obvious waste is something the Office of Inspector General would salivate over. This would be the sort of obvious waste they'd investigate, to see why a GS 15 employee has been assigned to a GS 2 or GS 3 position, at the GS 15 salary rate.

I just looked up GS schedules for 1995 when I worked at one agency and according to pay grades then in effect, my salary as a tech support contractor made me the equivalent of a GS 9.

Based on an actual, current VA posting on USAJobs.gov, Marvin's status as an IT support person with a technical degree and five years experience should qualify him at at least GS 15, which is about $86,000 a year. Even if they can afford to waste that kind of money to punish someone else's employee - if the Tombstone is "The Hlibrary of Congress," then it is a legislative branch agency (as the real Library of Congress is), whereas the VA is an Executive branch agency - they have nothing to do with each other and security clearances are not transferable (a person with an existing security clearance from a different agency will get a less intensive abbreviated investigation but there is still an investigation.) How does the mere director of IT for the Denver Veterans Administration hospital get another agency to accept a known problem employee and then agree to pay him at about 3 times what a normal GS 2 or GS 3 employee doing that job would make? (Nowhere in the story does it say this "punishment" came with a reduction in GS rating or pay level.)

I know you told me about the guy who ended up being a manager at a department that had no employees, but (not stated) he couldn't be RIFed (probably due to seniority). But in that case, he's still assigned to a manager position. He's being paid as a manager, even though he has nothing to do, not paid as a manager but assigned to work as a clerk in the mail room, that would raise flags in the OIG. It would look like favoritism.

Now, let's say Marvin normally has a job doing things like fixing servers, installing and tuning databases, and other highly technical work. In that case, he could have been downgraded to a technical support person who had to go around fixing people's computers or other work at their desks. That would make more sense, would still have him roaming all over the building, and isn't enough of a red flag that the IG's office would question it.

Also, if this work does require a security clearance, how does it get approved overnight? Marvin is working at an Executive Branch agency one day (the VA) and the next morning he is working for a Legislative Branch agency (the Hlibrary of Congress) doing something as sensitive as cloning would have to have very high security clearances, compartmentalization, and "need to know," separation. The mail would not be processed in the server room or where clones were being constructed, chances are nobody but the scientists dealing with them would know about it.

Yes, I understand that fiction sometimes requires you do things differently from reality. (Nobody ever comes out and admits on the witness stand they're guilty the way they did every week on Perry Mason.) But I'm not even a Federal employee and I know these things, it's likely others would too.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Billy Mays » Mon Oct 12, 2020 12:13 am

Flack wrote: Sun Oct 11, 2020 10:17 pmwhile others would let me roam around.
Did you ever raid anyone's candy bowl when they were out of their office? I'm getting all worked up right now just thinking about that sort of a powerplay. You see somebody's candy bowl and it's all filled up with the good stuff like tootsie rolls and tiny snickers and you just reach in and grab a huge honkering handful of it and stuff it in your pocket and if they mention it later on you just say "No, I didn't touch it, I'm a professional." and then turn in your report and return any keycards or temporary badges and walk out to your car knowing you got all this free candy on you?

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Jizaboz » Sun Oct 11, 2020 10:26 pm

Hell yeah! Good ol Prissy Polly's. I like Clark's down the road from them as well, but it not being "Lexington style" is why I recommended PP.

I still need to finish this book. I'm about half-way done. It's great, but I keep getting distracted by other things. Not sure how TDarco's didn't catch the part where he was sent to the mail room as an informal demotion, but good to see the feedback nonetheless.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Sun Oct 11, 2020 10:17 pm

Well, not quite.

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For a couple of years I worked for a department that provided pen testing services for other federal agencies. My job involved traveling to other cities, performing a predetermined set of security vulnerability tests on a target, and then adjusting my scans based on the results of my preliminary tests and going after targets. In the above picture, I determined that several users of a particular government agency were circumventing network firewall rules by setting up analog modems and dialing into their machines externally. Based on this finding, I cobbled together a port repeater and a bunch of analog models and basically wardialed the entire building until I found them. Before arriving, managers on both sides had to agree on the types of tests (some were network only, some involved a bit of physical exploring) and then there was an agreement that I referred to as the "pain-o-meter" as to just how much I could do. Some agencies/offices only wanted vulnerabilities identified, while others were confident (or cocky) enough to let me try whatever I wanted. Not all of those ended well. Some agencies wanted to know where I was every second while others would let me roam around. Those were the most fun, and probably the reason I still carry lockpicks in my laptop bag to this day.

The best part about that job was all the fun places I got to go. I went to New York City, Chicago, Atlanta, and Seattle, just to name a few. In 2010 I ended up in Denver and a very generous Ice Cream Jonsey picked me up from my hotel and took me out to eat and back to his place to play arcade games. A few years later in 2013 after spending a week in Research Triangle in Durham, NC, I drove over to see Jizaboz and trade Commodore games at his place before hitting the Lost Ark arcade, hanging out at the Hip-Hop Kung Fu Shop, and having some damn good BBQ at Prissy Polly's Bar-B-Que. That job had its benefits.

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Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Billy Mays » Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:02 pm

Flack wrote: Sun Oct 11, 2020 6:35 pmWhen I was working in security...

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Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Sun Oct 11, 2020 6:35 pm

Tdarcos wrote: Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:53 am Next item: Marvin's "demotion" to mail clerk. Having been a contractor employee at no less than 4 well-known federal agencies, I do not believe a person having IT qualifications would be assigned to be a mail clerk. Low-level jobs are easy to find people for, it's cheaper to hire contractors, even if they had to have security clearances. Considering how hard it is to find trained IT people, they're not going to waste one delivering mail. Now, maybe it's difficult to find additional employees in Bedly or the town the Tombstone is in, well, if you have to, you bus them in from Elko.
This part of the book is based on several real life events which I have witnessed. I once had a manager who was doing such a horrible job that he was "promoted" to a new area. When he arrived there, he discovered that although he was still a supervisor on paper, there were no employees under him, and no plans to hire any. He spent the last three years of his career as the "manager" over a staff that didn't exist in a department that was not being used. This is often done because it is terribly difficult to fire government employees. Marvin wasn't moved into a mail delivery role because they couldn't find anyone else. He was moved there as a punishment.
Tdarcos wrote: Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:53 amAlso, why would a VA Hospital IT person have a security clearance? I can see someone at the FAA needing one, knowledge of things like where there are gaps in radar coverage could be useful to people trying to smuggle things or people into the US. At worst an IT person at the VA might have access to sensitive patient data, but that should not be the sort of thing that requires a clearance.
So, every federal employee has a security clearance. Every federal employee has to pass a background check, including a criminal background check, a credit history check, and general background investigation. In addition to regular security clearances there are higher levels, including secret, top secret, and so on. Anyone who deals with HIPPA information, including the administrator of those servers, would have an elevated security clearance. My wife goes through an elevated background check because she deals with budgets and contracts. When I was working in security, I went through a fairly invasive secret background check. Both of us at different times have had cars parked outside our house monitoring our home, and more than once we've had confused neighbors stop by and tell us that they were questioned by someone from the government. On television and in spy novels only secret agents need background clearances. In reality, it's anyone who deals with money, or HR, or could be bribed, or has relationships with people outside the country, or deals with security, or a zillion other reasons. On our campus, the janitorial staff have to pass a background check.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Sun Oct 11, 2020 5:12 pm

Oh by the way, the item about the time it takes Marvin to drive was the reverse of the "By the Time I Get to Phoenix" problem.

In Glen Campbell's recording of Jimmy Webb's 1966 song about a man who finally decides to leave his wife or girlfriend, presumably from Los Angeles based on his travel descriptions.

"By the time I get to Phoenix, she'll be rising" - Call that, say, 7. To get to Phoenix would today take 5:15 and then probably 7 hours so he'd have to have left at midnight. Roads in 1966 were usually in bad condition, so while the speed limit might be 65, you couldn't go that fast; you'd break an axle.

"By the time I make Albuquerque, she'll be working" - Call that 10AM. Phoenix to Albuquerque is 415 miles and today takes 6½ hours, so he can't possibly drive there in 3.

"By the time I make Oklahoma, she'll be sleeping" - What, 8pm? It would take 11 hours, today, to drive from Phoenix to Boise City, OK. (The nearest crossroads or town to ABQ in OK.)

If we count the whole trip, LA to Boise City, OK, today 15:42, with no stops, on good quality, well-maintained freeways.

You might make it if you didn't stop for gas, pee, or food, but the roads in 1966 would not allow the same speed of travel as now. In short, the itinerary he gives can't be done.

Jimmy Webb has even told how people he's met have told him you can't get to Phoenix or Oklahoma in the time frame described in the song. Webb said he would tell them the guy is fantasizing leaving, as he's tried many times before.

And that's the whole point: Marvin's trip from Denver to Bedly can be made, and in less time than the book says: for the reasons voluminously described in the previous message, at the speeds he's doing, it should take 7 1/2 hours, not 16.

It's the reverse of the "By the Time I Get to Phoenix" problem.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Sun Oct 11, 2020 4:26 pm

Ice Cream Jonsey wrote: Sun Oct 11, 2020 11:17 am It seems that a precise and specific understanding of 1960s California politics is really what set the tone here.
No, actually for that, you'd want a really great book I read about 30 years ago, The Last Days of the Late, Great State of California by Curt Gentry, which is a fictional look back at California and what it was like before "The Big One" dropped about half the state into the ocean, basically everything within about 100 miles of the ocean went into the ocean, creating a new coastline.

Lots of things are lost to the rest of the US, including 90% of lettuce, 75% of grapes, 90% of avocados, 50% of almonds, significant amounts of crude oil and the refineries to process it, and the gasoline, diesel and aviation kerosene they produce, plus about a trillion dollars in real estate loans as well as several large banks including Wells Fargo and Bank of America (both then operating almost exclusively in California), and 10 million people, the coast being where most of California's citizens live. (California is a lot more populous now than in 1977.)

It's a history book disguised as a story, and very informative about California history from its founding as a series of Spanish missions in the 16th Century right up to the mid 1970s when the book was written.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Ice Cream Jonsey » Sun Oct 11, 2020 11:17 am

It seems that a precise and specific understanding of 1960s California politics is really what set the tone here.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Flack » Sun Oct 11, 2020 9:40 am

Busted on all counts. Great job.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:53 am

Next item: Marvin's "demotion" to mail clerk.

Having been a contractor employee at no less than 4 well-known federal agencies, I do not believe a person having IT qualifications would be assigned to be a mail clerk. Low-level jobs are easy to find people for, it's cheaper to hire contractors, even if they had to have security clearances. Considering how hard it is to find trained IT people, they're not going to waste one delivering mail. Now, maybe it's difficult to find additional employees in Bedly or the town the Tombstone is in, well, if you have to, you bus them in from Elko.

Also, why would a VA Hospital IT person have a security clearance? I can see someone at the FAA needing one, knowledge of things like where there are gaps in radar coverage could be useful to people trying to smuggle things or people into the US. At worst an IT person at the VA might have access to sensitive patient data, but that should not be the sort of thing that requires a clearance.

Also, I do not think an interagency transfer of an employee could be done overnight. Bureaucracies do not move at lightning speed, as your book even noted. Also, usually travel orders would allow adequate time for the person to get from one location to the other. Expecting someone to travel in a manner that either requires a long road trip, or a flight and then a drive probably would have given them 2-3 days, not overnight.

Also, if Marvin is an IT professional at the VA and has, I think five years service, I went up on USAJobs.gov, looked up IT specialist in Denver, Colorado, and by sheer coincidence the Department if Veterans Affairs has an opening for that very specific classification at GS 11-15, which js $55,204-$86,201 not including upward base pay adjustment if warranted for the locality.

A mail clerk at the IRS for example, is GS 2-3, about $12.22 an hour, call it $25k a year. So either Marvin got his pay cut by about ⅔ - which I doubt - I think he could get a job at at least $20 an hour with a technical degree, he doesn't have to travel three states over, or whatever agency is operating the Tombstone is paying $86,000 a year for a mail clerk when, if they have as high a level of technical applications as I would think they do, would be screaming for trained IT people.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by Tdarcos » Sun Oct 11, 2020 7:43 am

Flack wrote: Sat Oct 10, 2020 2:50 pm Thanks for picking up a copy of the book. Feel free to discuss any issues you have with the book.
Billy Mays wrote: Sat Oct 10, 2020 4:57 pm I would like to hear please.
AArdvark wrote: Sat Oct 10, 2020 5:53 pmNo, don't!
Sorry, 'Vark, you're outvoted two to one.

TL;DR The time it takes Marvin to get to his new job is much longer than it would be in real life. I explain how my hunch is confirmed by actual data.

Okay, the first thing was, he mentions the town of Bedly is "six hours from Las Vegas," which, since most people are not precise, probably means highway travel time of 5:45 to 6:15, less than 5:45, they'd probably say it's 5½ hours, more than 6:15 they'd probably say 6½.

It also must be 6 hours at highway speeds, not at "use radar jammer and push the truck to near its limits," because 6 hours at 80 or 90MPH puts you outside of Nevada! This has to be ordinary travel paths because most pickup truck and cars have to use regular roads: dirt, gravel, asphalt or pavement, they are not Land Rovers.

So I'm thinking it's somewhere near Battle Mountain. Using as a random place to pick for "Las Vegas" I chose the MGM Grand, 3799 Las Vegas Blvd. Google Maps says there to "Battle Mountain" takes 6:54, more like 7 hours, so that's too far. Elko takes about 6:29, so that's also too far. Wells, NV, at 5:59 is damn near perfect as an approximately 6 hour trip from LV.

So for this we can presume Bedly is approximately near (or is) Wells, Nevada. Now, when Marvin goes from where he lives to Bedly, he hits the radar jammer and maxes out the accelerator. As the speed limit in Utah is 80MPH, presumably he's going faster than that, everywhere. As the only time he stopped for pee breaks was when he bought gas, let's use an estimate he started with a full tank and drove until near empty, say his pickup has a 20 gallon tank and the empty mark is 17. Given, say, a Ford F150 doing 28MPG, will read empty every 476 miles, which will take, at say 90MPH, 5½ hours, and taking 10min. to pee and refill the tank, Marvin drove for 16 hours, so that means he did 3 fill-ups, and covered 1428 miles.

Okay, since we don't know where Marvin lived, let's take the Rocky Mountain Regional VA Center, only that's in Aurora, CO, not Denver, but it is close, maybe 5-6 miles out of town. The Denver VA hospital is on Hale Pkwy, and in 15½ hours of normal highway driving, gets you 1,035 miles to LA International Airport, and you could still travel almost 400 miles more, so I guess Marvin's new assignment is about 250 miles due south of Tijuana. That's a little outside of Nevada.

Also, his co-worker got reassigned and got there with enough time to check into a Hotel (employer provided, presumably), get a good night's sleep, and shower before dressing and being to work on time. She could not have flown there as the story mentions she still has her yellow Volkswagen with Colorado plates. She also Never exceeds the speed limit. A trip, again, from the Denver VA Hospital to Wells, NV is 626 miles and takes 10 hours and 24 minutes at legal highway speeds. If Marvin was really barreling, at 90mph, it should take Marvin no more than 7½ hours, allowing for 1 fill-up, and he'd still have about ½ a tank left. Not the 16 as the book says.

When i originally looked on Google Maps it told me a trip from Denver to a point in Nevada about 6 hours from Las Vegas takes less than 11 hours at normal speed. It's only now I got precise confirmation of why it is wrong, not just my hunch.

Re: The Human Library by Rob O'Hara

by AArdvark » Sat Oct 10, 2020 5:53 pm

No, don't!

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